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Title: Goodbye Yellow Brick Road Series: Supernatural and AtS, BtVS… 
8th-Sep-2006 04:31 pm [spn fic]
Title: Goodbye Yellow Brick Road
Series: Supernatural and AtS, BtVS crossover
Rating: R for dark themes
Pairing/Characters: Sam, Dean, AtS, BtVS character (read and see, you'll be glad I didn't tell you)
Notes/Disclaimers/Summary: Darkish fic, character death. Takes place post  SPN s1 and post BtVS and AtS series. 
Wordcount: 450

A little ficlet I pounded out quick and dirty at work this afternoon as a result of getting bitten by a bunny and being totally bored. Unbetaed. Inspired by a line in another little ficlet I read the other day by lyrstzha called Five Things Spike Does with Angel's Ashes.

Feedback is always, ALWAYS appreciated. 

When Sam wakes, he finds her standing in the moonlight coming through a stained glass window at the back of the empty church swaying and softly humming to herself. Next to her, massive oak doors stand partially ajar and he can see the Impala where they left it and the graveyard beyond where they’d come to spread their father’s ashes over their mother’s grave. He wants to ask her who she is, but then he realizes he knows, he's always known.
“Scarecrow,” she lilts and turns around to him and smiles her viper smile while twisting one of her long dark braids in her hand. Her dress is sky blue and her feet are bare. He comes to her, eyes glittering. Behind him Dean stirs where she placed him on the crumbling altar. She puts her finger over her lip then extends her arm and tsssks it back and forth “Ssh, Lion. Dorothy’s not ready for you just yet.” Her attention returns to Sam. “The stars told me to find you here. They said in this place I’d find new princes to replace the ones I lost.” She looks away dreamily and whispers, "Ashes to ashes, they all fall down."
Sam can hear Dean’s heart beating beneath her words, is called to it and turns around to go to him but she’s quicker and stronger, stops him in a blur with a hand on his chest. “Wait, Scarecrow. Let Dorothy teach you how it’s done.” She takes his elbow and walks him down the aisle, bride and groom on their way to a baptism. When they’re almost to the dais, the scent of Dean’s blood overwhelms him and he feels his features shift. He looks at her and sees that she’s done the same. He bends over and places his mouth on Dean’s neck. Grows instantly hard as his teeth sink like needles into the soft soft flesh. She strokes his head and coos her praises. He feels the moment Dean awakens and goes stiff under Sam's hands that have his brother’s shoulders pinned to the cold marble.
Sam, please are Dean’s last words as his heart slows and Sam is gently pulled away. He licks at the last trickle of blood oozing sluggishly from the twin wounds. Sam turns to her and watches mesmerized as she draws a slash across the top of one breast with her blood red nail and brings Dean’s mouth to it, cradling his head as he thrashes one last time.
“Good boys. Good darling beautiful boys.” She sing-songs as she arranges Dean on the altar, folds his hands over his chest.
Sam takes a seat in the front pew, body humming with the warmth of Dean's blood, and waits for his brother to wake.
rl - cowgirl up
9th-Sep-2006 12:13 am (UTC)


This is the best Buffy crossover I've seen and it's what, 5 paragraphs?

So interesting, to bring *their* worlds together. And that she could replace her loves, SO RIGHT. I can't think of any two other people who could.

omfg, and she calls him Scarecrow! SAM! Because they both have these long journeys, and they'll be even longer now.

mmm, love how we've caught them halfway. Dean a near-victim, Sam already done. And then when we realize what he's waking up from, what he's finding, oh...and the Impala the silent witness to it all. Chilling. Ooooohh... *coos*

I love this. I'd love to see this open into a larger fic, of their world, the Bros Winchester, vampires, with Dru. And their father...what would he do?

Or just keep it at this. Beautiful little bit of a world, a little gift. Sometimes thats good too.

Ah, dude. DUDE.
9th-Sep-2006 01:10 am (UTC)
thank you thank you thank you!

And their father...what would he do?

reread the first paragraph. killing him off was the only way i could think of to get the brothers back to Kansas where they had to be for the Wizard of Oz stuff to work), a place i don't think they're very keen on ever returning to. beanside helped with that. plus, the fact that all winchesters are "present" when this happens? i liked that idea alot.

9th-Sep-2006 12:47 am (UTC)
Wow. This is absolutely FUCKING AWESOME!!!

Wow. Wow wow wow wow!

I love it.
9th-Sep-2006 01:11 am (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed.
9th-Sep-2006 01:03 am (UTC)
Oh, this is _amazing_. So well done.
9th-Sep-2006 01:12 am (UTC)
Thanks for the praise. I'm glad you liked.
9th-Sep-2006 02:47 am (UTC)
Holy wow... I agree with the first comment. And I need more!!
11th-Sep-2006 04:24 pm (UTC)
I'm considering more. Stay tuned.
11th-Sep-2006 04:51 pm (UTC)
Yay!!! That would just be incredibly fantastic!
9th-Sep-2006 11:10 am (UTC)
Hee! Now I see what you meant! *grin* So much love!

And a really cool as hell crossover. Dark, and creepy and wonderful.
11th-Sep-2006 04:24 pm (UTC)
If anyone would know dark, it'd be you. *g*
9th-Sep-2006 03:23 pm (UTC)
Dru and the Winchesters, perfect!
Loved it, thank you.
11th-Sep-2006 04:25 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading!
10th-Sep-2006 12:24 pm (UTC)
That was fantastic. I got goosebumps.
11th-Sep-2006 04:27 pm (UTC)
Thanks! It gave me chills just writing it.
11th-Sep-2006 11:15 pm (UTC)
i loved it!!!
dru trying to replace her princes... Omg..beautiful..
12th-Sep-2006 05:24 am (UTC)
thanks! [Unknown LJ tag] has coerced me into writing more of this verse. stay tuned.
12th-Sep-2006 05:29 am (UTC)
i don't know what happened to my coding, but i was referring to onelittlesleep in my other comment.
27th-Sep-2006 04:37 am (UTC)


That's... wow. I just... I... wow. What an IDEA. Do you plan to take it anywhere??? Daaaamn. The thought of Sam and Dean as vampires together - whoo! What a THOUGHT. Nngh. So, so awesome. And you got Drusilla spot on, which I would imagine would be nigh impossible! Bravo :D
27th-Sep-2006 12:49 pm (UTC)
what praise! thanks. drusilla actually comes easy for me. hmmm. i'm not sure what that says about me but i'm glad to hear i got her right.

i've sort of been contemplating a sequel, but probably not. i've essentially killed off the characters as we know them, so writing a sequel would be like writing original fic and i don't think i wanna do that. but who knows, i may write a long au fic in this verse one of these days.
16th-Dec-2006 08:03 am (UTC)
It's really cool to know that I had a hand in inspiring something so wonderfully creepy. The crossover is deft and believable, too. This is an excellent slice of darkness, and packs a great deal of fine voice and imagery into an impressively economical space. Beautifully done!
8th-Sep-2007 10:29 pm (UTC)
This is so so COOL. I'm glad you pointed me to it. I love the creeping prose and the almost palpable darkness. Most excellent.
9th-Sep-2007 01:49 am (UTC)
Yis. Dru would *love* these boys.
9th-Sep-2007 02:54 am (UTC)
Stumbled across this and as a Dru lover.. I must say you totally ROCK! There's just not enough Winchesters/Drusilla out there.
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